[Dixielandjazz] Verse for "A Good Man Is ...."
Craig Johnson
civanj at roadrunner.com
Tue Dec 8 20:14:52 PST 2009
Ginny,
Take lines 3 &4 together!
I regret the day that I was born, and that man of mine I've ever seen.
and maybe it should read (change I've to I'd)
I regret the day that I was born, and that man of mine I'd ever seen.
and the break it apart and rearrange as:
I regret the day that I was born, and I (also) regret that I'd ever seen
that man of mine.,
That's the sense of it, but of course that would not fit the music.
Craig Johnson
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