[Dixielandjazz] Clarinet Haiku

[Edgerton, Paul A]

That's why I *really* need an editor.

Okay, then, try this:

A new box of ten
Expensive bamboo shavings
Is there a good one?



-----Original Message-----
From: l.swain at comcast.net [mailto:l.swain at comcast.net] 
Sent: Thursday, October 21, 2004 10:48 AM
To: 'DJML'; Edgerton, Paul A
Subject: Re: [Dixielandjazz] Clarinet Haiku


On 21 Oct 2004 at 12:26, Edgerton, Paul A <paul.edgerton at eds.com> said:

> A new box of ten
> Expensive bamboo shavings
> Can I use even one?

Sorry, Paul.

Too many syllables in the last line.

Larry Swain



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