[Dixielandjazz] Music Hai Ku

[Mike Marois]

Sorry, but this was the second verse to my previous hai ku:

Off Meter, Off Key
Will she ever get it right
She's the leader's squeeze

Also note an alternate version of my previous hai ku is:

Tribal drumming stops
Wickedly bad thing happens
Bass Player Solos!

Marois


---------- Original Message ----------------------------------
From: "Mike Marois" <Mike.Marois at hirelivemusic.com>
Reply-To: Mike.Marois at hirelivemusic.com
Date:  Thu, 21 Oct 2004 16:16:47 -0400

>Here's my entry:
>
>When the drumming stops
>A very bad thing occurs
>Bass Player Solos!
>
>Marois
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>---------- Original Message ----------------------------------
>From: "Robert S. Ringwald" <robert at ringwald.com>
>Date:  Thu, 21 Oct 2004 11:29:15 -0700
>
>>Hai Ku is a Japanese verse form of three unrhymed lines.
>>The first line has 5 syllables, the second line has 7 syllables and the
>>third line has 5 syllables.
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>>The jam session starts
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>>Somebody calls "Giant Steps"
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>>Cold fear grips my brain
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